Tuesday, October 5, 2021
Wed/Thur, Oct 6/7 writing reflection on prejudice.
Tuesday, October 5 Counselors and PSAT
The counselors are here today.
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Monday, October 4, 2021
Monday, October 4: culmination of material on America by Claude McKay.
In class: today you are independently completing a graphic organizer on Claude McKay's America that has been chunked, so as you are able to respond to specific lines in the sonnet. There is nothing new here. We have covered the everyone of the topics within the organizer. This is due at the close of class, unless you receive extended time.
Note: this will count as a writing grade.
Remember that the counsellors will be coming in tomorrow.
Missing an assignment? Please check the blog. Everything we cover in class is here.
America by Claude McKay
1. Although she feeds me bread of bitterness | 1. What is being personified in line one and is referred to as “she”
2. Explain the metaphor “bread of bitterness” After you have answered a and b
a. what is bread supposed to be for?
b. Is “bitterness” sweet or tart? Now return to number 2. |
And sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth, | 3. What does the visual imagery of a “tiger’s tooth tell us about the author’s feelings towards the city?
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Stealing my breath of life, I will confess | 4. Underline the word that LEAST reflects “stealing my breath of life”?
smother, choke, asphyxiate, inspiring |
I love this cultured hell that tests my youth. | 5. Think of the setting of the sonnet. Explain “cultured hell”
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5. Her vigor flows like tides into my blood, | 6. vigor is power (think vigorous). Now think about what tides are like and explain the simile “like tides into my blood”
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Giving me strength erect against her hate, | 7. Who / what is the author accusing of hate?
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Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood. Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state, | 8. What might the author mean when speaking about “her bigness”?
9. Note the simile “like a flood”. Look back into line 5. What word indicates the power of a flood? |
I stand within her walls with not a shred |
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10. Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer. | 10. Which word best defines a. terror: dread confidence courage b. malice: love contempt amity c. jeer: cheer applause sneer |
And see her might and granite wonders there | 11. To what do “granite wonders” refer?
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Beneath the touch of Time’s unerring hand, | 12. Why do you think “Time” is capitalized?
13. What literary device is being used here?
14. To err means to make a mistake? What does “unerring” mean”?
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Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand. | 15. The sonnet ends with a smile (like), comparing “priceless treasures sinking in the sand.” What is the author’s tone, which is the literary term for attitude, towards the city? Answer this in a complete sentence.
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Thursday, September 30, 2021
Friday, October : imagery practice
In class: Everyone will receive a handout, and everyone with complete an individual handout. However, you will work together to determine the types of imagery used and examples from the text to support your selection.
This is due at the close of class.
For anyone who is absent, please copy and paste the following onto a google document, complete and share with me. Make sure you have given me share rights.
Part 1
Group practice: For each of the following identify the type
of imagery: seeing /visual, hearing/auditory, smelling/ olfactory,
tasting/ gustatory, or feeling/ sensory.
1.
In the hard-packed dirt of the midway, after
the glaring lights are out and the people have gone to bed, you will find a
veritable treasure of popcorn fragments, frozen custard dribblings, candied
apples abandoned by tired children, sugar fluff crystals, salted almonds,
popsicles, partially gnawed ice cream cones and wooden sticks of lollipops. from Charlotte's
Web by E.B. White
The
type of imagery used is _____________________________.
Examples from the text that support this are: (insert examples) ___________________________________________________________________________
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2. In
the period of which we speak, there reigned in the cities a stench barely
conceivable to us modern men and women. The streets stank of manure, the
courtyards of urine, the stairwells stank of moldering wood and rat droppings,
the kitchens of spoiled cabbage and mutton fat; the unaired parlors stank of
stale dust, the bedrooms of greasy sheets, damp featherbeds, and the pungently
sweet aroma of chamber pots. Patrick
Suskind's novel, Perfume: The Story of a Murderer
The
type of imagery used is __________________________
Examples from the text that support this are:
(insert examples)
_____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
3.
On rainy afternoons, embroidering with a
group of friends on the begonia porch, she would lose the thread of the
conversation and a tear of nostalgia would salt her palate when she saw the
strips of damp earth and the piles of mud that the earthworms had pushed up in
the garden. Gabriel Garcia
Marquez One
Hundred Years of Solitude
The type of imagery used is
____________________________________
Examples from the text that support this are:
(insert examples)_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
4.
It commenced
rainin one day an did not stop for two months. We went thru ever different kind
of rain they is, cep'n maybe sleet or hail. It was little stingin rain
sometimes, an big ole fat rain at others. It came sidewise an straight down an
sometimes even seem to come up from the groun. Forest Gump by Winston Groom
The type of imagery used is
____________________________________
Examples from the text that support this are:
(insert examples) _________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
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5. Now
small fowls flew screaming over the yet yawning gulf; a sullen white surf beat
against its steep sides; then all collapsed, and the great shroud of the sea
rolled on as it rolled five thousand years ago. Herman Melville Moby
Dick
The
type of imagery used is ____________________________________
Examples from the text that support this are:
(insert examples)_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
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Part 2
Group practice. For each of the following sentences, identify the imagery is 1)
seeing/ visual, 2) hearing/ auditory, 3) smelling/olfactory, 4) tasting/
gustatory 5) touch/ tactile
1.
The eerie
silence was shattered by her scream.
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2.
Her face
blossomed when she caught a glance of him. _______________________
3.
He could
hear his world crashing, when he heard the news. _______________________
4.
She was
like a breath of fresh air infusing life back into him. ________________________
5.
The
concert was so loud that her ears rang for days afterward. ________________________
6.
The deep
yellow hues of the sunset drowned in and mixed with the blues of the sea.____________
7.
Mommy hauled her little baby up in the air,
placed him on the bed and prodded her fingers in his squishy skin eliciting
fits of belly-laughs.
_____________________
8. Brown horned gazelle meandered about the tall grass
blinking away the following flies; cushioned paws didn’t make sound and the
gazelle didn’t know the danger lurking
behind it.
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9. Ja’Nae didn’t have to wait for the clock to strike 2, her
mother stormed out of her room, slamming the door behind her and glaring at her
daughter, daggers in her eyes._____________
10. The wings of the fan curved like a dog’s ears waggled
with a raucous squeak at a speed that the air couldn’t reach the one sitting
under it._____________
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Thursday, September 30 figurative language devices in McKay's America
In class: Today you are looking closely at three figurative language devices that McKay uses in his poem America: imagery, metaphor and simile.
We'll anchor by reading the poem twice then; you have a class handout with the poem. This is due by the end of class as independent work, unless you receive the extended time.
If you are absent, please copy the document below onto a google doc, complete and share with me at
Please make sure you give me sharing rights.
FIVE Different Types of Sensory Imagery
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It is useful to break down sensory imagery by sense.- Visual imagery engages the sense of sight. This is what you can see, and includes visual descriptions. Physical attributes including color, size, shape, lightness and darkness, shadows, and shade are all part of visual imagery.
- Gustatory imagery engages the sense of taste. This is what you can taste, and includes flavors. This can include the five basic tastes—sweet, salty, bitter, sour, and umami—as well as the textures and sensations tied to the act of eating.
- Tactile imagery engages the sense of touch. This is what you can feel, and includes textures and the many sensations a human being experiences when touching something. Differences in temperature is also a part of tactile imagery.
- Auditory imagery engages the sense of hearing. This is the way things sound. Literary devices such as onomatopoeia and alliteration can help create sounds in writing.
- Olfactory imagery engages the sense of smell. Scent is one of the most direct triggers of memory and emotion, but can be difficult to write about. Since taste and smell are so closely linked, you’ll sometimes find the same words (such as “sweet”) used to describe both. Simile is common in olfactory imagery, because it allows writers to compare a particular scent to common smells like dirt, grass, manure, or roses.
- Visual imagery engages the sense of sight. This is what you can see, and includes visual descriptions. Physical attributes including color, size, shape, lightness and darkness, shadows, and shade are all part of visual imagery.
- Gustatory imagery engages the sense of taste. This is what you can taste, and includes flavors. This can include the five basic tastes—sweet, salty, bitter, sour, and umami—as well as the textures and sensations tied to the act of eating.
- Tactile imagery engages the sense of touch. This is what you can feel, and includes textures and the many sensations a human being experiences when touching something. Differences in temperature is also a part of tactile imagery.
- Auditory imagery engages the sense of hearing. This is the way things sound. Literary devices such as onomatopoeia and alliteration can help create sounds in writing.
- Olfactory imagery engages the sense of smell. Scent is one of the most direct triggers of memory and emotion, but can be difficult to write about. Since taste and smell are so closely linked, you’ll sometimes find the same words (such as “sweet”) used to describe both. Simile is common in olfactory imagery, because it allows writers to compare a particular scent to common smells like dirt, grass, manure, or roses.
America
by Claude McKay
1. Although she feeds me bread of bitterness,
And sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth,
Stealing my breath of life, I will confess
I love this cultured hell that tests my youth.
5. Her vigor flows like tides into my blood,
Giving me strength erect against her hate,
Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood.
Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state,
I stand within her walls with not a shred
10. Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer.
Darkly I gaze into the days ahead,
And see her might and granite wonders there,
Beneath the touch of Time’s unerring hand,
Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand.
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Name_____________________________________
Claude McKay’s America Identifying figurative language devices of imagery, simile and metaphor and how they are used within the poem. Although there might be sometimes more than one possibility. You only need to select one type of imagery and explain its usage within the poem.
America
by Claude McKay
1. Although she feeds me bread of bitterness,
And sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth,
Stealing my breath of life, I will confess
I love this cultured hell that tests my youth.
5. Her vigor flows like tides into my blood,
Giving me strength erect against her hate,
Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood.
Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state,
I stand within her walls with not a shred
10. Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer.
Darkly I gaze into the days ahead,
And see her might and granite wonders there,
Beneath the touch of Time’s unerring hand,
Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand.
text | Type of figurative language device | Explanation of how or why this contributes to the understanding of the poem |
“feeds me bread of bitterness” | metaphor | Bread is essential for life. The poet needs the city to stay alive, but his experiences are difficult.
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“…sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth” |
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“Her vigor flows like tides…” |
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“Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood” |
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“…see her might and granite wonders there” |
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“Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand” |
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…as a rebel fronts a king in state. |
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Tuesday, September 28, 2021
Tues/ Wed, Sept 28/29 prejudice and Claude McKay's America
Nobody is born prejudice, yet throughout history, we continue to form opinions about people who look or act differently than we do.
Begin with a correct MLA heading:
Your name
Instructor's name
English-II-( ), America
27 September 2021
Respond to the following question in a complete, well-written sentence.
1. How does prejudice emerge in a person or society?
(Be prepared to share)
Respond to the following question in two to three complete, well-written sentence.
2. What are the effects of prejudice? (consider customs, laws and institutions)
(Be prepared to share)
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Let's take a look at ourselves
Concepts That Numb the Brain
The effects of prejudice – what happens inside us, outside us, and all around us – when prejudice exists.
Hurtful Words
There are words in our vocabulary that disrespect and dehumanize people. Many are designed to put down certain groups. Using hurtful words is one way we let our prejudices show.
Conditioned Thoughts + Reinforced by Conditioned Feelings = Conditioned Re-Actions
Making Generalizations
Lazy thinking causes us to make generalizations about people without taking the time to find out the specifics of who they really are. Take a look at a few results of prejudiced thinking.
Sterotyping
A standardized mental picture held in common by members of a group, that represents an oversimplified opinion, attitude or judgment.
Test your prejudiced thinking by mentally filling in the blanks in your mind. Do not speak your thoughts aloud.
- Westerners are ________
- Northeasterners are ________
- Southerners are ________
- Northerners are ________
- Foreigners are ________
- Asians are ________
- The Irish are ________
- Mexicans are ___________
- Jews are ________
- Africans are ____________
- Arabs are ______________
Bigotry
Refers to one who is strongly partial to one’s own group, belief system, race or politics, and is intolerant of those who are different.
A bigot has a fixed mindset, an immovable way of thinking that divides people. Bigots think in terms of “my group” vs. “your group.” As soon as we have “my” vs. “your” anything, we have conflict. Sectioning the human race into “different” parts creates separation and conflict.
In this life, we focus more on differences than similarities, and we need to change this.
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WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 29: Collect your notebooks.
The following is a continuation of your responses / reflections on prejudice.
We are reading Claude McKay's sonnet America as a class.
As you read, take note of the figurative language device of imagery. Think about how the five different senses are employed to give depth of thought and feeling to McKay's poem.
Once we have reviewed the poem, please follow the instructions listed below to respond to the four questions that follow.
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| New York skyline 1920's |
Guiding questions:
What is the theme or central idea of Claude McKay's America?
How does he feel about this city?
What are clues in the poem that tell us how feels?
This unit has to do with prejudice and discrimination. How is this relevant to this poem?
AMERICA
by Claude McKay
1921
As you read, note the use of the figurative language device of imagery* in this sonnet* that communicates the speaker's perspective on America. We will be reviewing the poem's imagery in class on Thursday.
* an English sonnet has 14 lines of 10 syllables per line
*imagery is the use of figurative language to represent the objects, ideas, and actions in such a way that the appeals to the physical sense.
Sensory imagery involves the use of descriptive language to create mental images. In literary terms, sensory imagery is a type of imagery; the difference is that sensory imagery works by engaging a reader’s five senses. Any description of sensory experience in writing can be considered sensory imagery.
Five types of imagery: (there are more, but this is what we are focusing on)
1. seeing or visual
2. hearing or auditory
3. smelling or olfactory
4.tasting or gustatory
5. feeling or sensory
1. Although she feeds me bread of bitterness,
And sinks into my throat her tiger’s tooth,
Stealing my breath of life, I will confess
I love this cultured hell that tests my youth.
5. Her vigor flows like tides into my blood,
Giving me strength erect against her hate,
Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood.
Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state,
I stand within her walls with not a shred
10. Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer.
Darkly I gaze into the days ahead,
And see her might and granite wonders there,
Beneath the touch of Time’s unerring hand,
Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand.
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In your notebook, as a continuation of yesterday, please respond to the following guiding question. Weave in text using evidence from the poem (don't forget you quotation marks" to support your response. This needs only to be one or two sentences.
Your question: What is the theme or central idea of Claude McKay's America?
Example of how to weave in the text:
In response to the question of how McKay feels about the city:
McKay has mixed feelings about New York. While he "love[s] this cultured hell", the city "feeds [him] bread of bitterness."
Note that how you can change the word within the line. Just put your words into brackets.
Text-Dependent Questions Directions:
For the following four questions, choose the best answer: In your notebook write:
number 1: number 2: number 3: number 4:
Question1_________________
1. PART A: Which of the following best describes the speaker’s feelings about America?
A. The speaker has experienced both good and bad things in America, and thus
remains indifferent.
B. The speaker despises America and has decided to speak out about their bad
experiences.
C. The speaker has a love-hate relationship with America, but ultimately has lost
faith in the country.
D. The speaker dislikes and has lost faith in America and believes that it will not last
as it is.
Question 2______________________
2. PART B: Which of the following quotes best supports the answer to Part A?
A. “Although she feeds me bread of bitterness, / And sinks into my throat her
tiger’s tooth, / Stealing my breath of life, I will confess / I love this cultured hell
that tests my youth.” (Lines 1-4)
B. “Her vigor flows like tides into my blood, / Giving me strength erect against her
hate” (Lines 5-6)
C. “Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state, / I stand within her walls with not a shred--
/ Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer.” (Lines 8-10)
D. “Darkly I gaze into the days ahead, / And see her might and granite wonders
there” (Lines 11-12)
Question 3_____________________________
3. PART A: In line 11, the word “darkly” is most likely used to convey which of the following?
A. The word “darkly” conveys the speaker has an overall cynical opinion of America.
B. The word “darkly” conveys the speaker’s general fear of time.
C. The word “darkly” conveys the speaker’s uncertainty about the future of
America.
D. The word “darkly” conveys that the speaker does not actually know anything
about America.
Question 4_________________________________
4. PART B: Which of the following phrases supports the answer to Part A?
A. “I gaze into the days ahead” (Line 11)
B. “might and granite wonders” (Line 12)
C. “the Touch of Time’s unerring hand” (Line 13)
D. “priceless treasures sinking in the sand” (Line 14)
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